Friday, 8 February 2013

Callum's 100Word Challenge - Week 18

Monday 17th April, 1999, that’s when the disaster happened. That’s when I got kidnapped and now I’ve been in this spooky house ever since. That happened two years ago, I miss all my family and friends but I will get back, one day.

Two years early, out of the blue he came at me, he said to me “ Are you ready?” What for? I’m still figuring that out, now. The next thing I knew, I was in this house, the house that I am in today. I was locked in my empty bedroom with only a blanket to sleep with. My biggest nightmare...   
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10 comments:

  1. Anonymous8 February 2013 at 14:47

    Hello I'm from your blogging friends ash class my name is Sunny i loved your 100 wc it was amazing and horifiying



    P.S. keep it UP

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  2. Anonymous8 February 2013 at 14:48

    Hello Callum that was a really good I like all your adjectives and connectives please carry on because your story is really really good

    Zedek & Zafirah

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  3. Anonymous8 February 2013 at 14:51

    dear Callum
    I am from Springwell junior ash class and I really enjoyed your story it was very descriptve and the best thing about it was the kidnapping part that REALLY frightened me ,keep on with your fascinating and descriptive work , I look forward to seeing your story next week Callum bye

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  4. Anonymous8 February 2013 at 14:53

    Wow Callum you did a fantastic 100 word challenge. You have done an amazing job we would like to hear more pieces of writing written by you. From Hannah and Ayush your freind bloggers from Ash class

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  5. Anonymous8 February 2013 at 14:58

    Dear Callum
    I am from Springwell Junior School Ash class and I really really liked your story. The best thing about the story is the threatening part which is at the end of your 100 word challenge. Keep up your persuasive language! Bye I will write back to you on your next fascinating Challenge!

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  6. Anonymous8 February 2013 at 14:58

    Hello my name is Shyloh. Good sentence openings very good adding details to your challenge

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  7. Kittiwake11 February 2013 at 09:48

    Hello Callum,

    I love how you have kept things hidden from the reader. I still don't know exactly what it was that captured you - just 'he'.

    I wonder how you would continue this story?

    Keep entering the 100wc.

    Mrs W Team 100wc
    Flamborough, East Yorkshire

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  8. Anonymous13 February 2013 at 16:06

    I agree. Who captured you . I really liked it . Keep up the good work.

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  9. Anonymous13 February 2013 at 16:15

    hi
    I'm in mme toivonens class and i really liked the adjectives. Well done

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  10. klaud1 March 2013 at 13:35

    Good 100wc Cai :]

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