I was out with my mate, at a adventure
camp. We were there with the class. We were a mischievous pair and didn’t really
listen to instructions. Anyway we were going on a walk, GROANNN…. Of we went to
the woods as we got closer me and Mike spotted a sign: BEWARE. That’s all it
said ??? Confused and curious we raced in like a bull. We wondered inside, astray
from the rest of the class…..’Boo’! ‘AAGGHH ohh Mike…’ I blushed. I heard him
mutter scardy-cat under his breath. ‘I’m not scared…. Il show him… Then
looking behind me I saw …..
Hi Emily, it feels great to read my first story for this season of 100wc.
ReplyDeleteYour adventure is interesting. I like the way you ended with such a huge suspense. This keeps me wondering what happened next.
Well done for this good start.
Hi Emily this story is amazing and very imaginative. I love the way you used the word mischievous instead of naughty. I also love the ending it leaves the reader wanting to know more.
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hi Emily' i love how the story ends with a cliff hanger. it really makes you you think whats behind them goodbye kind regards...
ReplyDeleteVERY GOOD STORY
ReplyDeleteThankyou everyone for your lovely comments.
ReplyDeleteEmily