It was the night when Aunt Mary and Uncle Colin were
stopping. Before they arrived, we were just sitting down for dinner when the
phone rang. It was Aunt Mary saying that they were involved in a large car
crash, so could not make it. “Bring Bring” the phone rang again. It was an
unknown number. The message read: “Hand over your Corgi, or never see your baby
again.” They replied with the answer of, “Take the baby.” The baby disappeared
out of the air.
I really like this 100WC Isaac but near the end It got slightly weird.But I quite like it like that. Although what you could do is maybe set the scene a little better because it didn't make sense about a corgi and a baby and in parts it got confusing.
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I really like this 100WC Isaac but near the end It got slightly weird.But I quite like it like that. Although what you could do is maybe set the scene a little better because it didn't make sense about a corgi and a baby and in parts it got confusing.
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Wow isaac that was brilliant but I do agree with Harvey it was a bit confusing, but great.
ReplyDeleteI like your 100 WC Isaac it is a strange yet amazing story.I hope you get on the blog next week.
ReplyDeleteHi Issac I like that the baby disapered ...Jonny ash class
ReplyDeleteYour 100 word challenge was intersting up to the part when the phone rang again! I didn't quite understand about the corgi and the baby! Good Try!
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