We worked in collaborative groups to create our own parts of the poem. We put all the parts together and came up with our class version. We wanted a poem that makes people reflect, think, and question.
What do you think?
Mind Talk – Your choice
By maple
If you think
you’re not trusted,
You’re not.
If you think
about bad thoughts,
Bad thoughts
will think of you.
When you think
you’ve failed a test,
You have.
If you want to
argue, then you shall.
If everybody’s
self-talk is negative,
The world will
be a miserable place.
When you think
you’re beaten, you’re sad.
Even if you try
harder and harder, you’re mad.
Have you ever
felt ashamed? You are.
If you feel
afraid, you are.
If you don’t
put in the pennies, you’ll never get the pounds.
Should you be
in life’s tournament and you’re sure you’re done for,
Then my friend,
you are.
When you think
you can’t find the words,
You never will.
If you feel
like you’ve fallen,
You have.
It’s all in the
mind – what you think will happen, probably will.
Life begins
when you start taking part.
If you believe
in yourself, you will probably win.
Do you believe
you can make it?
Because you
can.
Have you never
achieved something in life?
Have faith and
you soon will.
Your life is in
your hands.
Your choices
are your destiny.
Life is good
when you help other people.
You choose.
I think this is a great poem Maple class. It makes me think about the choices I have in my life. Do I want to be positive or negative? Well done. You have worked together well to create a thought provoking piece of work.
ReplyDeleteMrs Prior
Hi maple class
ReplyDeleteWelcome back to school. We arelooking forward to blogging with you this year. Your poem is wonderful. It is very inspiring and I am sure that it will encourage you all to work hard, do your best and look after each other.
Have a great year,
Mrs Verona Gridley and SeniorG
www.juniorsblackburn.edublogs..org
Wow. I love this! In our class we talk about always being positive towards all aspects of our life. I agree with everything that you have written and think it is inspiring!!
ReplyDeleteMr.Aiston
Needle School, Telford
What a thought-proviking poem. We talk a lot about choices at my school, and it is really important to remember that we all have the choice to act how we want to act. This poem reaffirms that really well.
ReplyDeleteMr Harrison
Headteacher
Miriam Lord Primary School, Bradford.
I love this poem, it really shows what our class is capable of!! :-)
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