Hi I’m Amy and….wait there’s
no time for chat now. I’ m bursting to tell you my story, ok here’s how it all
began… I had been trapped in my nightmare for five minutes, but I was already
terrified. I could just feel terror creeping up my spine. I could smell the
monsters stench and, see there ugly faces staring at me licking there lips.
Suddenly I heard a humongous roar. I closed my eyes dreading the consequences;
looking behind me I saw a dreadful creature. I froze. “aaaaaagh”.
I like how you have wrote: ' I was trapped in my nightmare for five minutes...' It really grabs your attention!
ReplyDeleteFantastic description, Amy. I almost felt like I was trapped in that same nightmare!
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