One
day we were just sitting down for dinner when there was a knock at the
door. I couldn’t work out who it was knocking at my door so to be safe, I
quietly tiptoed to the front door and slid my head through Moggie’s cat flap
and noticed a small package in brown paper and tied up with string. It was for
ME! I opened the tiny parcel and it was the most extraordinary thing any one
could ever discover. It was… the worlds smelliest, stinkiest and horriblest
cheese in the world. “HORRAY! The gloriest, greatest, most amazing CHEESE!”
Hi Karis
ReplyDeleteWell done. I was definately not expecting cheese to be in the package, though I am glad it was only cheese. Lots of suspense. I enjoyed that. Great description of the cheese also.
Thanks
Nadine (Team 100WC)
Thankyou Nadine although I did'nt even expect cheese to appear either mabie I should write more seriusly next time,
Deletenice talking to you
Karis:)
Hi Karis
ReplyDeletei really like the way you described the cheese you used really good words and i like the surspence that you put in well done karis.
Elise
I agree - some great describing words!
DeleteWell done Karis! I can't blame you for feeling so excited about the cheese; you can't beat a good brie or a traditional cheddar. I made my own cheese once...
ReplyDeleteI hope to see more 100 Word challenges and tell everyone from me- the greatest worrier of Greenfields, that the SATs really aren't that bad.