Thursday, 13 September 2012

Sam G's 100 Word Challenge Week 1


It was a grey lousy day in London. The damp humid fog lingered around the streets and terraces in the early morning hours. I looked up from my bedroom window up into grey sheet of cloud. Then a flash appeared in the sky. I looked closer. Something was heading straight for Earth. A ball of fire. I ran down stairs, out the door “Help, help!” I shouted, but nobody could her me I ran down the street quicker and quicker. Suddenly “BANG!” looking behind me I saw a cloud of smoke. I fell on the floor. I was dead.


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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous14 September 2012 at 23:38

    Great stuff Sam. You really created tension in your writing and I love how you used 'lingered.'
    Really clever idea to use the prompt at the end, our children will try that next week.

    Mr.Aiston
    Newdale Primary

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  2. Anonymous21 September 2012 at 11:49

    wow Sam I really like your 100 word challenge I think Its really good and the way you described the city of London was really good.from Harvey

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  3. Mya21 September 2012 at 11:50

    Hello Sam. I really like it because it is so mysterious and you don't give too much away in the one hundred words. :D

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  4. Prawnsandhummus6 October 2012 at 21:59

    Brilliant writing Sam; I kept on wanting to read more. However, you wouldn't realise you were dead if you were dead because you'd be dead. New record- 3 deads written in one sentence!(Virtual hi-five).

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