Friday, 7 December 2012

Elise's 100 Word Challenge Week 12

The Box "Well six o clock in the morning and mum and dad are not awake" I exclaimed to my sister "Well I'm not surprised it is early." she said as she sat up in bed. "Yeah true" i spoke "But they said they would.oh well" I cried with happieness as i got down from the bunkbed. It was my birthday. I ran downstairs and made two cups of tea one for Mum and another for Dad. I ran back upstairs and gave them their tea. They thanked me and drunk it slowly after a while they gave me a packet. There it was. What was it? POP!
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  1. Caitlin7 December 2012 at 19:52

    Dear friend,
    This is a great 100wc. I like the way you have started it with 'The box' It made me think well its not about Christmas like mine and then carried on reading. I also like the idea of the birthday. How did you come up with the idea? From Caitlin www.6d2012.highlawnprimary.net

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    1. elise9 January 2013 at 16:17

      Hi freinds at highlawn
      Hi caitlen
      I'm not really sure how I got the idea it just popped into my head thank you very much for your comment I will go on your blog over the weekend and comment on some work at your school

      From your dear friend at greenfields
      Elise

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  2. Mrs Prior10 December 2012 at 13:52

    Well done Elise. Now I wonder what was in that box. You had worked so hard for it - making your parents tea on YOUR birthday! What went POP I wonder.
    Next time, remember to use a new line for a new speaker.
    Mrs P

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  3. Anonymous11 December 2012 at 17:03

    well done on this weeks 100wc- very good how you turned it to be your birthday and lovely that you made the cups of tea.

    Jenny team 100

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